Thursday, April 23, 2026

Poetry Friday: “Impressions” — An Ekphrastic

Last month, Tanita Davis shared the latest challenge from the Poetry Pals


Here’s the scoop: we’re writing ekphrastic poems, which might pair beautifully with your plans for National Poetry Month (I’m attempting poetry comics). Ekphrasis is a Greek word which means “description,” and you’re invited to choose your own image from anywhere – personal pictures or otherwise. Are you in? Good! You’ll have the month to craft your creation and share it April 24th in a blog post and/or on social media with the tag #PoetryPals. We hope you’ll play along!



Oooh, I love an ekphrastic. Even so, I put this assignment off until this week because … well, because that’s how I roll. Image choice was WIDE open, so I had trouble narrowing it down. Then yesterday, out of the blue, this one — A Sunday Afternoon on the Island of La Grande Jatte by Georges Seurat — came to mind. 


I realized I’ve never thought much about the people depicted in this painting. I’ve assumed they're an ordinary assortment of urbanites enjoying a day by the water. It turns out there's other speculation about them too. I found several commentaries that remarked on this idea: 

There has been scholarly debate as to why Seurat included certain motifs in the painting, possibly alluding to prostitution that took place on the island, where clients would meet. Two notable motifs include the woman to the left with the fishing rod and the woman to the right with the monkey.

The fishing rod could be suggestive of the idea of “fishing” for a possible desirable woman or that the prostitutes fished for prospective clients. The female monkey’s name in French was singesse, which was also a term utilized for prostitutes. The woman on the right could be with a client.

                                                     — from Art in Context

Who knew? 

On the other hand, given that women are routinely misjudged, unfairly labeled, frequently stereotyped, presumed upon, lied about, and otherwise wronged and maligned, the idea/poem/twist that came to me was this:   



Impressions  
(after A Sunday Afternoon on the Island of La Grand Jatte


People always have their opinions. 

Some of you eye us and think,
“Ah, another Sunday in the park 
with George.” 
But also? 
Many look askance. 
They assign a seedy motive
to my sister’s fishing expedition. 
Presume my pet monkey 
means I am a woman 
of questionable character. 
But perhaps I just love animals? 

Why has no one asserted 
or assumed that 
my predominant thoughts are these: 
"This fabric does not breathe
I’m ready to go. 
I hate this stupid bustle. 
It's hitting the floor the minute 
my monkey and I get home.” 

    — Karen Edmisten 

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1 comment:

Tricia Stohr-Hunt said...

I adore your poem. I'm ready to throw off whatever I'm wearing when I get home. I can only image what that dress was like. Well done!