Thursday, June 15, 2023

Poetry Friday: an unexpected encounter

Photo courtesy of Emily Hopper/Pexels

I got busy last week and didn't get a post done but today I sat down and captured this moment from a recent walk. I try to walk most mornings and one route I take goes by a protected wetland area. 

I don't usually feel the need to protect myself from the inhabitants but, hey, I was, after all, the trespasser in this scenario. 

Unvigilant
by Karen Edmisten 

An unexpected
encounter, the impact as if
a piece of sky pounced.
Thwacked from behind, 
I was startled, unmoored,
looked around.
His innocently cocked head 
fooled me not.
Red-winged blackbird thug.


18 comments:

Linda Mitchell said...

Ha! I hope you're ok. How fun and funny to read about that rascally red-winged thwacker. And, it's really lovely to see your original work here today. Well done, Karen.

Karen Edmisten said...

Hi, Linda! Ha, yes, I'm fine. I was just so surprised at my Hitchcockian moment. I turned around to identify the culprit and actually said out loud, "Really?! That's what we're doing now?" 😁

Tabatha said...

I'm always amazed by how small animals are willing to take on big animals, haha! I like "a piece of sky pounced."

Karen Edmisten said...

"...willing to take on big animals." Right? He was so cocky. :D

Susan T. said...

Whoa! I can just picture this scene you described, Karen! What the heck? I guess you were near his nest. Or maybe he was in a mood?

Melanie B said...

Oh I love it. What a perfectly delightful and unexpected moment.

Karen Edmisten said...

Yes, I think he was in a mood because I was near his nest. :) There are a lot of them nesting in that area. I read up on them after it happened and they're known to be aggressive during mating season and when they think the nest is threatened. One website mentioned that they are "known to dive bomb humans and other predators such as crows and hawks." I don't think I looked too intimidating but, y'know, it's all in one's perspective. :)

Karen Edmisten said...

Anything that inspires a poem or a good story is worth experiencing, right?

Linda B said...

I look for them as I hear them when I walk at a certain lake but yes, you must have made him worry. What a surprise, and thinking "as if
a piece of sky pounced." That is funny, Karen. Glad it was only a "red wing" from the sky. Glad you're okay!

Karen Edmisten said...

Linda, you're smart to be vigilant. :) It was such a surprise, and then so funny.

Carol Varsalona said...

Karen, an original poem hits home-I guess we all have to on alert with the animals that inhabit earth. The bird as a "thug"-great word choice. I once walked alone through the forest nature trail and encountered two deer coming toward me. I also felt unbalanced and wanted to be far away from the duo. Later that day my daughter said, "The deer won't hurt you" but that did not make me feel better.

Karen Edmisten said...

Thanks, Carol. Did you see Patricia Franz's recent post about finding (in her kitchen!) a mama bear and her cubs?

Patricia Franz said...

Cool! I've only had close encounters with our winged friends. Yesterday, leaning on my deck rail I was treated to a swoosh encounter with a passive-aggressive Stellar's Jay. He's still mad that I dismantled his hoped-for nest inside my deck umbrella. Happy wandering!

Bridget Magee said...

Konkaree! Glad that "piece of sky" didn't hurt you, Karen. Beware birds with attitudes. :)

Karen Edmisten said...

Patricia, we've been making some swallows mad, too, as we dismantle nests as soon as they start to assemble them. They keep returning every year to Edmistrano and while, on the one hand I love them, on the other hand they can make such a mess. :)

Karen Edmisten said...

Bridget, I'm feeling like "konkaree" should become the name of a poetry form now. :)

Michelle Kogan said...

"Thug" so appropriate for those menacing red-winged blackbirds, and your poem so timely for this nesting period of their's. I'm teaching a Plein Air Class on Sunday afternoons and the park we are in has big signs all over telling us all to be aware and careful of the nesting red-winged blackbirds. I saw one man that was thwacked on the back of his head about three times, I also heard they don't like hats. Great post Karen, thanks, and I hope you are okay too!

Karen Edmisten said...

Thanks, Michelle! I am fine, and I hope that poor guy who was thwacked three times is too. :)