Welcome to the Poetry Friday round-up!
Last week, the Poetry Peeps shared pieces inspired by the work of U.S. Poet Laureate Arthur Sze. The challenge was flexible. (Read: “Pick a poem, any poem! Write in his style, or don’t! Focus on a line, a stanza, a theme, the ghost of an idea. Whatever you want!”) I love a wide-open challenge … until I don’t. But the fault, dear reader, was with me, not with the peeps posing the challenge. As I’m wont to do, I allowed procrastination and choice-paralysis to defeat me. I wrote nothing for last weeks’s round-up, so I decided to tackle it this week. Here’s how it unfolded:
I tinkered with one of my favorite Sze poems, "The Shapes of Leaves.” I played around with the shapes of houses, I experimented with the shapes of hands (as the objects that "our emotions resemble”) but I wasn’t satisfied with what was flowing. (Because it wasn’t flowing.) I still liked those ideas, but set them aside.
Then I bumped up against another of Sze’s poems, one that, serendipitously and in that lovely, winding way of poetry, happens to reference “The Shapes of Leaves.” Eureka!
In “Residence on Earth,” Sze recounts a gathering of poets and a reading of his work. I did a little digging and it seems he’s referring to the Festival Internacional de Poesía de Medellín. (Here's a video of his reading.)
“Residence on Earth” ends with:
I took the words “one way to live” and ran with them. Here’s my draft:
One Way to Live
(after “Residence on Earth” by Arthur Sue)
One way to live on this earth
I understood how poets from all over the world
had come for peace, solidarity, justice—
and when my host, and reader of my poems
in Spanish, invited me into his home, I saw
one way to live during our residencia en la tierra.
I took the words “one way to live” and ran with them. Here’s my draft:
One Way to Live
(after “Residence on Earth” by Arthur Sue)
One way to live on this earth
is in stunned observation.
You see chaos before you,
but are paralyzed, inert,
a terrified deer.
One way to live on this earth
but are paralyzed, inert,
a terrified deer.
One way to live on this earth
is in constant bellicosity.
You howl at the lunacy
until your throat
until your throat
is raw and torn.
One way to live on this earth
One way to live on this earth
is in quiet service.
You see gaping needs;
you fill one, meet another,
walk toward the next.
One way to live on this earth
is in the
shimmering
rainfall
of
words.
You shine light,
reflect truths:
chaos, lunacy,
desperate need, yes,
but also beauty, tenderness,
the shape of a leaf.
A band of poets become
one voice, create one home,
fashion a refuge.
Together,
while in residence on earth,
they have found
one way to live.
~ Karen Edmisten
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32 comments:
Karen, thank you so much for the hopefulness in "One Way to Live." Beautiful. (And it made me teary!) I also enjoyed Sze's reading, and can see why you tried some Shapes of Leaves first. Muchas gracias for the roundup, too.
Karen, this is a really lovely poem! I've got Sze's Collected Poems on my wishlist for owning (but, well, the wishlist is about 200 books long, give or take, so …) 🤍📚
Karen, there is so much to love in your poem, I found a different favorite line with each new stanza. So beautiful!
So beautiful -- and perfect for a Poetry Friday gathering! Love "the shimmering rainfall of words"! I'm afraid lately I've been living on this earth as per stanza 2. Thanks for hosting this week!
Yes, let's "fashion a refuge" even if it's just momentary, thanks for all the choices and thoughts, and for hosting us this weeK! And for Arthur Sze's poem and reading "The Shapes of Leaves," lovely.
Susan, aw, thank you! Happy to be the cause of some tears. :)
elli, thanks so much, and I can relate to such an, ahem, lengthy wishlist. ;)
Thanks, Marci, that's so kind of you!
Jama, you're not alone, friend. Stanza 2 is all too real these days for many of us. ❤️
Michelle, he's a treasure, isn't he?
Oh, my goodness. I'm heartsick over the bellicosity...but the hope of poets, the shape of that refuge is beautiful. I'm there. Thanks so much for hosting this weekend.
Yup, gotta have the hope, Linda! Poets are so good at pointing the way. ❤️
Thank you for the lovely, hand-holding poem, Karen, and for hosting! xo
This is truly an anthem for positive living, and an anthem for Poetry Friday! THANK YOU!!
PS -- and thanks for hosting us, too!
Thank you for your shimmering rainfall of words and shining light--and for hosting this week! (Somehow I managed to put my link in twice and couldn't figure out how to remove it...please feel free to do so if you know how!)
Karen, your resultant poem offers a range of possibilities for living, some immediately appealing, others, less so. It shines a hopeful light on choosing positive actions. You have done good work here with words. Thank you also for hosting.
I'm only familiar with a little bit of Sze's work, sothank you for sharing this. Your poem does, indeed, represent the positivity and hope we need now. Thanks for hosting!
Oh, Karen, each week you share something that makes me wish to write like that, and now, your poem, fills me up with a wonder at human beings that do need to realize, and celebrate, that they do have choices, in their "One way to live on this earth". It fills my heart! Thank you for hosting!
Karen, your exquisite poem, especially that beautiful, hopeful, and comforting image of the "band of poets" resonates so deeply and thank you for gathering a "band of poets" together this week. Love the refrain of "One way to live on this earth"! This is a poem I will return to, and savor. Thank you!
I'm definitely going to have to check out Arthur Sze's work. Each of the posts I've seen has nudged me in that direction. You've written a beautifully structured poem inspired by his words. I love the refrain "One way to live." Thanks also for hosting.
"the shimmering rainfall of words" - how beautiful! Thanks for hosting, Karen.
What a gift you've given us with your words! Thank you for hosting.
Karen, thank you for a poem that gives, as others here before me have said, a sense of hope. We all have a way to contribute to something better during these times (or any times). I appreciate how you've brought that idea to light in a beautiful way.
Karen, this poem is amazing and brought me to tears as well. IT is an anthem for our times and expresses the map to peace in our hearts— living in service and letting our hopeful words fall like rain. What a beautiful way to start my Friday :)
the shimmering rainfall of words - yes!! Thank you so much for this beauty and for hosting us today.
Beautiful, lovely "one way to live," rhythm and flow:) Yes, to "a band of poets fashioning a refuge..." Thanks for sharing and hosting! PS also a coffee lover here:)
Thank you, Karen, for your beautiful poem. My writing group of eight women meet once a week to write and then share our drafts. We often comment on how our time together keeps us both whole and hopeful in these challenging times.
Wow, Karen, this is so lovely! You are on a creative roll, lately! Thanks for sharing this and for hosting this week!
Thanks for hosting, Karen--I love how one thing led to another in this quest to acknowledge Arthur Sze, and I love how one things leads to another in your poem and then rolls up all the ways (since each is a part of us) in the creative fashioning of "a refuge" while in residence, as we all are always, on earth.
Karen, these exquisite lines are tender & expansive at the same time. I am the "quiet service" soul, yet owe so much to the bellicose shouters.
I luv how you "bumped" into the poem that became perfect for this prompt from the creative Peeps.
BRAVA!
[ am away from M/Linky - at my blogk still celebrating the community of poets in FOR THE WIN, selected by Irene & Charles from Feb. 22 https://bookseedstudio.wordpress.com/2026/02/22/good-sports/ ]
this band of poets from Poetry Friday certainly got me through January, and all the paralysis I was feeling from the news. I am so thankful for all the poetry that has kept me sane.
I suffer this too: "allowed procrastination and choice-paralysis to defeat me". I like what you did in your poem. I felt the call.
Brava, Karen! I love how you found truth reflected in the shape of a leaf -- and that one way to live is in the unity of our poetic voices. Deep sigh :)
Yikes, I fell behind yesterday on replying to comments but wanted to thank you all for the kind and encouraging words. This community is the *best* — definitely one way to live. :)
Your poem is gorgeous, Karen. I applaud persisting through the process of creating this poem and sharing it with us. (I appreciate knowing it's not just me!) Thank you for hosting this week.
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