Poetry Peeps! You’re invited to our challenge for the month of August! Here’s the scoop: If poetry is a love letter to readers, this month, we’re writing back. Using Nikki Giovanni’s “Talk to Me, Poem, I Think I Got The Blues” as a mentor verse, we’re writing poetry directly in conversation with a poem. Whether you talk back directly to Ms. Giovanni’s work, or choose another poems to pass notes to is up to you, as is length and form. Are you in? You’ll have a month to craft your creation(s), then share your offering on August 29th in a post and/or on social media with the tag #PoetryPals. We hope all of you will join the fun!
I cheated a little and broadened the rubric: I'm in conversation with a poet (and a smattering of her poems) rather than addressing my plea to a single selection. I couldn't wait to talk to Emily Dickinson and ask her to reveal her secrets. Even though I'm nobody, I knew she would indulge me. She hasn't written me back, but I'm a patient correspondent.
(The lines in italics are either taken directly from Dickinson's poems, or are a rearrangement of her words.)
Talk to Me, Emily D.
(with thanks to Nikki Giovanni)
"In this short life that only lasts an hour
How much—how little—is within our power."
~ Emily Dickinson
I have a few questions, Miss Dickinson.
(May I call you Emily? I’m nobody, but
I feel like we’re friends.)
I have questions, Emily.
The first is the easiest
and also impossible.
How do you do it?
How much—how little—do you do?
Do you dream a poem?
Does it waft in, fully formed,
gorgeous in its shape and complexity? Or,
does it hover tantalizingly near you,
a shape-shifting cloud
informing image and imagination?
Or is it baking that inspires
the rising of precise words?
While your hands are kneading,
is your inscrutable mind churning?
Cinnamon, nutmeg, allspice, cloves—
Is the secret, instead,
in the scent of gingerbread?
You dwell in possibility but in
the impossibility of this world too,
its planks of reason broken.
Still.
Still, you conjure
that Stop-sensation on my Soul,
and Thunder in the Room.
Talk to me, Emily D.
How much—how little— do you do,
do you know?
Dazzle me gradually with your truth.
~ Karen Edmisten
References:
- "How much—how little—" (from "In this short Life that only lasts an hour," 1292)
- "I’m Nobody" (from "I'm Nobody! Who are you?" 260)
- "I dwell in Possibility" (466)
- "planks of reason broken" (adapted from “I Felt a Funeral in My Brain," 340: "And then a Plank in Reason, broke,")
- "that Stop-sensation on my soul and thunder in the room" (from “I got so I could take his name,” 293)
- "Dazzle me, gradually, with your truth" (adapted from “Tell all the truth but tell it slant,” (1263): "The Truth must dazzle gradually/Or every man be blind—")
Mr. Linky awaits your dazzling contributions this week. Thanks for sharing in the conversation.
16 comments:
How many of us would love to know Emily's magic. I love love love her work. Your's is a delightful poem full of great questions and the smell of gingerbread, which I also love. Thanks for hosting and getting me to think about ED.
What a poem I wish I had written! I love your questions for Miss Dickinson. The specificity you sprinkle in shows just how much you have befriended Miss D. A wonderful job. Thanks for hosting us this weekend.
Janice and Linda, thank you! Emily D. and I have been friends for a long time. ;)
Ahhh... Thank you, Karen, for these "precious words" to eat and drink - yours and Emily D's, and most delicious! :0) Much appreciation for hosting us all this week.
I like this prompt! I wonder what ED's answer would have been? Such a fascinating question. I wouldn't ask most poets, but I would ask her. I like that she conjures thunder in the room! Thanks for hosting us! xo
I love the line, "I'm nobody, but I feel like we're friends". That is such a modern idea. Not just with reading poems, but with the internet and websites in general. You all share so much of your lives in your webpages. It's as if I am getting to know you all, though I may never see you face to face. Thanks for helping me feel welcome in my poetry.
"Do you dream a poem?" Sigh ...
Karen, I love your poem and your questions for Emily. I love that you incorporated words and phrases from some of her poems.
Thanks for hosting today!
Such a scrumptiously delicious poem, wafting with wonderful aroma, I love it, and also would enjoy hearing her response too! Thanks for hosting us!
Ah, Karen, she dazzled me a little more with your beautiful poem and conversation with her. I love the repetitions of Still / Still and "How much--how little--do you do?" Beautiful incorporation of her lines in yours. Thank you for hosting.
Karen, thank you for hosting with a wonderful poem and conversation with Emily Dickinson. I especially like the stanza on baking. I am glad that precise words rose as you wrote.
Karen, I'm dazzled by your conversation with ED and how you brought so many of her lines into the conversation. Lovely! Thanks so much for hosting. xo
I love this poem, Karen, and the found poem parts of it work so beautifully and naturally... Also, just the conversational awe you have... if only she could answer!!!
Karen, I love your take on this challenge!! Talking back to a poet *through* their poems is brilliant and Miss Emily's always seem so perfectly narrative. May she continue to gradually dazzle us.
Love, 🥰 tanita
Thank you for sharing your lovely poem with us, Karen! 💞
Karen, Thanks for hosting and for sharing this very lovely and imaginative poem. Emily is one of two poets I wanted to focus my attentions on this year. Thanks for the references, too! I will check them out!
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