Friday, August 31, 2007

I don't know if he meant for this to be a poem

from my friend Tim, the Frustrated Gardener.


Most flowers fading.
Cut back Lion's Tail and Dr. Seuss bush.
Roses coming back
for a second round,
albeit smaller flowers.
Second batch of corn
taller than Ryan,
Black Zucchini
larger, wider
than Ryan.

3 comments:

Susan said...

That's very creative, Karen. Certainly sounds like a poem to me!

Tim said...

I do really think, now anyway, I'm a poet and didn't really know it. Leave it to you, Karen, to show me the way. Thanks!

Cloudscome said...

I love the shape of this, and the hopeful progression. I think found poetry is a new favorite form for me.