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Thursday, January 30, 2025

Poetry Friday: Sustenance (and happy anniversary, Atticus)

Atticus and I celebrated our 41st anniversary this week. 

And all those skeptics thought we'd never make it, (tsk, tsk.) But here we are, and here we'll stand, and here we go, shooting for another forty-one. (Well, umm, maybe at least another 30? We'll take what we can get, I suppose.) 



Here's a poem I wrote quite a while back, one I sometimes recycle on our anniversary. 

Happy anniversary, Atticus. Thank you for the bread and promises. 


Sustenance
by Karen Edmisten 

Bread,
like marriage,
requires the promise
of leavening.

There is flour and water —
foundation — yes,
but it begs
something more:
fermentation, lather,
messiness
and growth.
It must take on life,
risk failure,
swell in size,
though never
sloppily escape
its necessary confines.

My husband
mixes flour
and water,
baking bread for me.
It is nothing,
he says.

It is everything,
I counter,
as I watch him
measure, stir yeast
and add salt,
carefully constructing a promise.

~~~~~~~~~~



24 comments:

  1. Karen, this is a beauty of a poem. It is tender, loving, and beautifully constructed. Happy Anniversary!

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  2. Ah, happy anniversary! Bread is such a beautiful symbol in your poem, and Atticus baking it for you is icing on the cake! Bread and promises. Beautiful!

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  3. Karen & Atticus, fabulous 41st anni. fun wished to you two. And some fresh fro the over warm, buttery, home-made Atticus-bread. I love this poem, Karen.

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  4. Happy Anniversary Karen and Atticus!! LOVE the poem, it's perfect. I'll always think of Atticus as the bread man :).

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    1. Thanks, Jama! I think of him as the bread man too. :)

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  5. 41 years!! That's amazing. How wonderful for you💞a very special gift, indeed, to be granted a life-companion. Happiest of anniversaries to you both🌸🕊️

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  6. "carefully constructing a promise" - sigh! Happy Anniversary!

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  7. Oh, a love poem for Atticus! Happy Anniversary to you both, having "everything"!

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  8. Happy Anniversary! I'm sitting here at the kitchen table with my sweetie planning our 30th and laughing over how hubby remembered the date wrong. Oh, if only we could take the love and laughter we've grown like a leavened loaf of bread back to day 1--we would have been so much richer!

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    1. Linda M., if you see this, will you email me? :) Thanks! xo

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  9. Linda M., after so many years, mixing up dates is pretty easy to do, isn't it? :D Have fun planning and celebrating, and happy 30th!

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  10. It is everything. I love that! Happy anniversary. My husband and I celebrate 37 years this Thursday :>)

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  11. I made bread last week for the first time in a while. It was good medicine! Happy anniversary!

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  12. Thank you for the wonderful poem that you shared.m Great sensation with these lines: In fact
    the very page smells of spilled
    red wine and the mustiness of the sea

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