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Thursday, October 03, 2024

Poetry Friday: "First Fall" by Maggie Smith


Last week I wrote about motherhood (with a little help from Wallace Stevens) and this week Maggie Smith (the other one, the poet) is doing the talking on the subject. This short piece is poignant and beautiful. Enjoy "First Fall." 


First Fall
by Maggie Smith

I’m your guide here. In the evening-dark
morning streets, I point and name.
Look, the sycamores, their mottled,
paint-by-number bark. Look, the leaves
rusting and crisping at the edges.
I walk through Schiller Park with you
on my chest. Stars smolder well
into daylight. Look, the pond, the ducks,
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18 comments:

  1. Thanks for the poem Karen. My grandson is at the age of pointing to everything and telling me his name for things. It's like I am learning a new language! BTW the link did not work.Have a good day!
    Cathy

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    1. Cathy, thank you for letting me know about my link error! I just fixed it. Thanks so much!

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  2. Maggie Smith had me at "the evening-dark morning streets." Thanks for sharing.

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    1. Rose, yes, isn't that perfectly evocative of that kind of morning?

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  3. And that is what mothers do, bring in the world for their children. It's lovely, Karen. I'll pass it on to my family's moms!

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    1. It's one to pass on for sure, Linda. Thanks for stopping over!

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  4. " a porthole/sighed here" -- gah! She's such an incredible see-r. And a belated thank you for leading me to George Bilgere's daily poems! What a joy!

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    1. Patricia, yes, she has such a keen eye and I'm so glad you're enjoying Bilgere's daily poems. I am too!

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  5. Love this! Maggie Smith is one of my favorite poets!

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  6. Beautiful poem, love it! "Ice sleeving the gray bare branches" -- wow! Now I need to read more of Smith's poetry. Thanks for sharing!

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    1. Jama, she paints the most eloquent pictures, doesn't she?

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  7. Wow, such a feeling of mystery and tenderness in this poem. Thanks, Karen!

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  8. Gorgeous poem. Isn't it funny how, each time you read a poem, you might be struck by a different part of it? This time what struck me was "The first time you see/something die, you won’t know it might/come back." So poignant and lovely. Thanks, Karen!

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  9. Karen, I never read this poem before. It is beautifully written and these words, frost soft and ice sleeving presented a dazzling image of a winter day.

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